Hi, ich bin todraw und bin neu in diesem Board. ;D Freue mich das ich ein Board gefunden hab wo man seine Rap's posten kann.
Dies wäre einer meiner ersten mehr oder wenig vollständigen Rap's
(Weiss jetzt aber nicht ob ich einen vollständig englishen Rap posten kann, da in den Forenregeln steht man solle hier auf Deutsch posten und inwiefern das für die Rap's gilt oder eben halt nicht)
Würde gern eure Meinung dazu hören, bin für jeden Tipp dankbar.:
Part 1
i've got to say thx alot for the last shot
that was the last thing i needed
and again the devil nearly got feeded
feeded with a new darkned soul
i know i know for u it wont play a role
for me that was just the final goal
yea u reached it
i know u dont give a sh..i.>it
should i quit?
but....
Refrain:
you ve already forgot me
i am not blind i see
its like cold steel knifes are piercing
through my heart an i am still feeling.....
sadly i am feeling....
an thats killing....
thats killing.....
killing me....
Part 2
i am just listening to the sound
my heart now, a big wound
i know i should be able to get arround
with feelings like that
but i cant thats just sad
evrything twisting through my head
over and over again
of course i know
thats all in vain
soo....
i take the evry day rain
within the pain
to put out
this flame that burned
for you now i turned
an i learned
how to get arround
maybe now i can solve this wound
Refrain:
you ve already forgot me
i am not blind i see
its just like cold steel knifes are piercing
through my heart an i am still feeling.....
sadly i am feeling....
an thats killing....
thats killing.....
killing me....
Part 3
new day
i am sitting here nobdys arround
-i am alone
so i try to cord up my wound
-emotions gone
feeling flows
<<i dont want to feel
but
<<the ice cold steel
nothing glows
<<in my heart....
now....
Outro
i realised that i was the one who shots
with bullets of pain
in my thoughts
i realised an i wont do it again i wont cause
just hurted myself
an thats in vain